Copycatcrime請幫我修改講稿 - 社會議題
By George
at 2008-06-06T00:00
at 2008-06-06T00:00
Table of Contents
模仿犯罪是個由媒體所促成的社會議題,一些學者發現媒體暴
力會激勵或暗示人們的攻擊性進而促成人們犯罪,四分之一到
三分之一的男性暴力犯承認當他們做壞事時會從電視模仿犯罪
手法。除此之外,媒體傳播訊息和事件快速,雖然媒體只是要
讓人們知道這些令人傷心的事,然而因為媒體總是描述關於自
殺或做惡的細節,這種不良的現象變成教人們如何做他們沒想
過的不道德的事,而且這種現象會被循環,校園槍擊是一個典
型的例子。
Copycat crime is a social issue that made by media ,some scholars
have explored that media violence can inspire or hint offensive of
people then promote people to do evil.One fourth until one third of
male violent criminal who have recognized that imitating crime skills
from television when they were doing evils.Additionally ,media
spread information and events very fast,although the media just let
people know those terrible things;however,media always describes the
details about suicide or evil things.This unhealthy phenomenon
becomes teaching people how to do the unethical things which they
never thought of it.And this phenomenon would be recycled. School
shooting is a typical example.
以上是講稿 還沒完全完成 是一半而已 請幫我修正文法
可以的話 順便告訴我有沒有更口語話的寫法 因為是講稿@@
請不吝伺教 !
阿富請勿出手 禁打廣告!
Update:
To知識小霸王:
Copycat crime是維基百科也有的字耶
但還是謝謝你的指教
力會激勵或暗示人們的攻擊性進而促成人們犯罪,四分之一到
三分之一的男性暴力犯承認當他們做壞事時會從電視模仿犯罪
手法。除此之外,媒體傳播訊息和事件快速,雖然媒體只是要
讓人們知道這些令人傷心的事,然而因為媒體總是描述關於自
殺或做惡的細節,這種不良的現象變成教人們如何做他們沒想
過的不道德的事,而且這種現象會被循環,校園槍擊是一個典
型的例子。
Copycat crime is a social issue that made by media ,some scholars
have explored that media violence can inspire or hint offensive of
people then promote people to do evil.One fourth until one third of
male violent criminal who have recognized that imitating crime skills
from television when they were doing evils.Additionally ,media
spread information and events very fast,although the media just let
people know those terrible things;however,media always describes the
details about suicide or evil things.This unhealthy phenomenon
becomes teaching people how to do the unethical things which they
never thought of it.And this phenomenon would be recycled. School
shooting is a typical example.
以上是講稿 還沒完全完成 是一半而已 請幫我修正文法
可以的話 順便告訴我有沒有更口語話的寫法 因為是講稿@@
請不吝伺教 !
阿富請勿出手 禁打廣告!
Update:
To知識小霸王:
Copycat crime是維基百科也有的字耶
但還是謝謝你的指教
Tags:
社會議題
All Comments
By Candice
at 2008-06-08T19:28
at 2008-06-08T19:28
Scholars explored that media violence can encourage a person to act with violence
About one third of the male audience admit that they imitate television programs when committing a crime
Moreover, media's have been very selective in a negative way. They spread around negative and disappointing news at a very high speed. They emphasizes too much on details that people start learning from it. The classic example is campus shooting; more and more similar crimes have been committed since the first one has been reported.
因為是演講 可以盡量減短扼要 太細節不用講 例如1/4-1/3..妳就講個大概1/3就可以了 這樣也比較不會納麼難懂
2008-06-06 15:28:31 補充:
They emphasizes too much on details AND people start learning from it.
文法小錯誤 補充一下
Related Posts
(“急”)問:有關墾丁國家公園的SWOT矩陣策略表
By Connor
at 2008-06-06T00:00
at 2008-06-06T00:00
太陽能滅蟲燈
By Regina
at 2008-06-06T00:00
at 2008-06-06T00:00
金魚的尾巴有血絲
By Mary
at 2008-06-06T00:00
at 2008-06-06T00:00
我哥的肝功能檢查指數偏高於正常值!!!該怎麼辦
By Frederic
at 2008-06-06T00:00
at 2008-06-06T00:00
買股票或基金要怎樣先做功課
By Victoria
at 2008-06-06T00:00
at 2008-06-06T00:00