【公視議題】可否幫忙檢查文法呢? - 社會議題

很遺憾我不能參加台灣的遊行，希望有天我的孩子還能觀賞公視這個頻道。
在美國，很多人藉由電視獲得資訊，當你手握遙控器並躺在沙發上選擇喜愛的頻道，的確很容易放輕鬆，但你很有可能在收看驚悚片的時候，急著替自己的孩子矇上眼，也時你可能在電視聲中睡著，然後暗自認為在一天工作下來有個娛樂。我們寧因夢想而忙碌，也不要因忙碌而失去夢想。人人都有責任監督我們的社會發生了什麼事，我們的政府做了什麼事，我們是如何生存在一個資本主義的社會，如果大家都不在乎，當我們發現這個事實證正在傷害我們的時候，未來唯一可做的就只剩一聲長嘆...
我們都不希望被愚弄。
I feel sorry that I can't participate the protest in Taiwan, one day, I hope, my children still have a chance to watch Public Television.
In the United States, many people get information through Television, when you hold a remote control and lie on a couch, you choose your favorate, that's really easy to relax, but you may cover your son's eyes when you are watching a thriller. Sometimes you may fall asleep with the TV sounds, and you think at least you have an entertainment after a long day. We work hard for our dream, don't lose your dream because you work hard. We all have the responsibility to check what's going on in our society, what the government have done, how we live in a capitalism world, if we don't care, all we can do is a deep sigh when we figure out the truth is hurting us.
We don't want to be fooled.