全球暖化GlobalWarning - 暖化

Jacky avatar
By Jacky
at 2013-11-02T00:00

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幫我修改文法和幫我接下去(中間要加也可以)
How does Global Warming affect human beings?
How does Global Warming affect human beings? Global warming is not effects that was centuries later, it is already affecting our lives. Humans are causing global warming and we are suffering as a result, and the consequences will only get heavier.
Climatic changes by global warming can bring in their wake extreme conditions like huge storms, drought and floods and can be of immediate threat to life. The effects of global warming are strongest at the poles. Ice all over the world is melting. The melting ice increases the sea level and cause flooding in low areas. The increased temperatures are not only melting icebergs and glaciers, it is also causing animals to migrate to different areas or die, upsetting ecosystems, and it is also changing precipitation patterns.
What we can do as we are Global Citizens to Save our Planet and Save ourselves is we need to take steps to control global temperatures from reaching dangerously high levels. We can do our own bit by helping out and some of the measures include: First, Using less fossil fuels and electricity – switch off lights, fans, air-conditioners, computers etc. when not required .Second, Recycling paper, plastics and whatever we can and planting more trees.
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Caitlin avatar
By Caitlin
at 2013-11-04T09:30
我覺得你寫得不錯,看得出有用心、認真在寫。我的修改除了以訂正文法為主,還稍修飾不太順的語氣或語句。行文結構就不予更動。
How Global Warming Affects Human Beings (標題不宜寫成問句,作者的重點在闡述解釋,不是「問天」)How does global warming affect human beings? Global warming is not a phenomenon that is yet to come centuries later, it is happening now. Humans are causing global warming and we are suffering as a result. If we don't take actions, the consequences will only get worse.
Climatic changes by global warming can bring in their wake extreme conditions like huge storms, drought and floods, which can be of immediate threat to life. The effects of global warming are strongest at the poles. Icebergs and glaciers are melting at faster speed than they used to be. Sea level thus rises and causes flooding in low areas. (這裡的動詞 cause 前面已出現過,建議你去查 thesaurus, 輸入 cause, 看能找出其它相關的動詞代替) In addition to geographic impact, higher temperature changes precipitation pattern that directly impacts animals migration away from the habitats, upsetting ecosystems eventually.
As global citizens on the one and only Planet Earth, we need to take steps to control global temperatures from rising to dangerously high levels. We can do our own part by taking measures including using less fossil fuels and electricity, consuming less energy by switching off electronic appliances during off hours, recycling resources to save more trees. As Rome wasn't built in a day, global warming may not be cured in a year. Let's take one step at a time, slowly but surely, to save our children from the worsening effects of global warming.

有藝術家住蛋殼屋以警示世人全球暖化的問題,如何警示?

Kumar avatar
By Kumar
at 2013-11-01T00:00
他做了這件事,可是我沒got是如何被警示的這只是一種噱頭來引起注意,還是他這行為內涵的意義我真沒got?

台灣參與的地球工程

Ingrid avatar
By Ingrid
at 2013-10-20T00:00
我想請問一下
台灣在解決全球暖化的努力上,在地球工程的部分做了什麼?
謝謝

海平面一直上升政府怎麼面對?

Elizabeth avatar
By Elizabeth
at 2013-10-02T00:00
關於地球暖化海平面不斷上升問題
我們政府有沒有應變的政策呢
台灣是四面環海的國家
有人知道這幾年海水上升多少

火力發電的燃煤有用盡的一天嗎?

Ina avatar
By Ina
at 2013-09-30T00:00
請問台灣當前的火力發電廠有幾座
有人說27座 但有些資料是10座左右?
再來就是台灣的火力發電是使用汙染最高的燃煤嗎?
還有台灣火力所使用之� ...

地球一直暖化海平面上升幾公尺才會造成地下鐵路淹水?

Skylar DavisLinda avatar
By Skylar DavisLinda
at 2013-09-30T00:00
地球一直暖化海平面上升幾公尺才會造成地下鐵路淹水?