校正文章文法錯誤，已先自行翻過一次 - 社會議題

Ethan avatar
By Ethan
at 2010-02-21T00:00

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這是一篇說明概念產品的小短文，在下已有照著自己的意思寫了一次。但恐文法及句型結構有誤，還請熱心人士不吝指教。感謝==========Theelectricitymeterareoftensetinthepublicarea.Wecanonlyfindouthowmuchweshouldpayfortheelectricitywhenthebillarrived.So,wehaveanideaofsettingupanelectricitymeterathome,thereforepeoplewillbeabletoknowhowmuchelectricitythey&a

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William avatar
By William
at 2010-02-21T23:05
修正如下，請參考。Theelectricitymetersareoftensetinthepublicarea,wecanonlyalwaysfindouthowmuchweshouldpayfortheelectricitythatwasusedonlywhenthebillarrives.So,wehaveanideaofsettingupantheelectricitymeteratinsidethehomehouse,thereforepeoplewillbeabletoknowhowmuchelectricitytheyhaveused.(全段建議一致使用現在式)TheAwindmilloftenrepresentsanimageofenvironmentalprotection（環保��
Belly avatar
By Belly
at 2010-02-23T14:12
Electricitymetersareoftensetupinthepublicarea.Wecouldn'tfigureouthowmuchweshouldpayfortheconsumedelectricityuntilthebillsarrive.Therefore,wecameuptheideaofsettingupthemetersinthehousesothatpeoplewillbeabletoknowhowmuchelectricitythey'veusedanytime.Windmillsoftenrepresentimageofenvironmentalprotection.Wedecidedtousewindmillastheinterfacetotellpeoplehowmuchelectricitypowertheyhaveused.Themor

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By Delia
at 2010-02-20T00:00
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By Hamiltion
at 2010-02-20T00:00
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By Audriana
at 2010-02-19T00:00
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By Liam
at 2010-02-19T00:00
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By Madame
at 2010-02-18T00:00
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