為何不能這樣寫??(為什麼錯?) - 暖化

By Liam
at 2014-03-22T00:00

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1.愈來愈多人正開始提倡吃在地食物的觀念
More and more people is starting promotion that eat local food.
2.改變我們的飲食也可以幫助阻止地球暖化
Changing our diet also can help earth keeping from global warming.
3.The amount of water and land used to produce meat是用來種農作物地的許多倍
is as much as crop.
以上三句都有錯為什麼不能這樣寫?(拜託各位大大解釋一下~越詳細越好~~謝謝~)
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To 阿玉:
THAT也可以引導[名詞子句]啊??
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to :I Am Nothing At All
為什麼你會這樣寫啊?
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TO: I Am Nothing At All
★ 註解: diet = 節食, 並非「改變我們的飲食」的含意，所以我改成了＂Changing our eating habits....＂
1.diet 不是也可以指飲食嗎?
2.愈來愈多人正開始提倡吃在地食物的觀念
註解: have started for the promotion....用了現在完成式, 表示某動作已經開始一直廷續下去
可是題目說[正開始]ㄝ? [正開始]不是=[剛開始]
應該用進型式?
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TO : 阿玉
所以引導名詞子句的THAT 是連接詞不能像關代一樣表主格受格所有格?

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By Agatha
at 2014-03-24T12:31

More and more people is starting promotion that eat local food.
that 的先行詞如果指的是promotion 那語意就不同了，會變成
promotion eat local food.很奇怪吧？吃在地食物是一件打算要去作的事
所以應該去掉 that　而改成不定詞片語 to eat local food
Changing our diet also can help earth keeping from global warming.
help 後要放原形動詞keep ，or prevent from也可
3.The amount of water and land used to produce meat　is as much as crop .
前項的用地是為了生產肉品，　是用來種農作物地的許多倍，許多倍的部分尚
未翻譯出來
A is as much as xxx times B . A 項和數倍的B項一樣多
所以　as much as　many times crop.
2014-03-23 19:13:34 補充：
that 如果是名詞子句的話,必須有自己的主詞,動詞,自己形成一完整的句子,因為eat前面沒有主詞，所以它不是，如果它要引導附屬子句，它也不是，因為子句裡面就是沒有主詞
3）題，請參考david的寫法，　many times的位置在 as much as之前較為正確
is many times as much as crop.
2014-03-25 00:21:13 補充：
that 引導名詞子句
I think that you are smart. 名詞子句作為（think動詞）的受詞
that 作關系代名詞, 引導形容詞子
You are a smart student that I have ever seen.子句的受詞是student
He is the greatest inventor that ever lived. 　子句的主詞是inventor
that 沒有所有格

By Una
at 2014-03-26T11:52

"正","開始",與"提倡"就算在中語裡也是奇怪的說法吧?
正開始?是還沒開始,但是快要開始了吧?
"提倡"但是代表自己不一定在做吧?
那麼,問題一與以下有神不同?
"越來越多人只食用當地的食材"

By Andy
at 2014-03-25T09:34

1.愈來愈多人正開始提倡吃在地食物的觀念
More and more people are starting the promotion of eating local food.
2.改變我們的飲食也可以幫助阻止地球暖化
Changing our diet also can help(to) keep earth from global warming.
3.The amount of water and land used of meat produce
是用來種農作物地的許多倍
is many times as much as the crop.
as much again,as many again 有多一倍的意思但我覺得這裡用以上寫法即可
once as much as 一倍
twice as much as 二倍

By Sarah
at 2014-03-26T18:28

1.愈來愈多人正開始提倡吃在地食物的觀念
More and more people is starting promotion that eat local food. ( 中式英語)
★建議: More and more people have started for the promotion to eat the local
food.
2.改變我們的飲食也可以幫助阻止地球暖化
Changing our diet also can help earth keeping from global warming.
★建議: Changing our eating habits can also help for keeping off the change of the global Ecological environmental warming of the earth.
3.The amount of water and land used to produce meat是用來種農作物地的許多倍is as much as crop.
建議: To breed the edible animals are in need of much water and the lands than the crops planting in lots of doubling.
飼養食用動物需要更多的水分和土地，相對是比種植農作物多出許多倍。
★ amount 總數、總額（一般是指金錢上的)
★★produce 生產( 一般是指工業或其他之纇的)
★★★建議多加強英語語法和習慣法方面的學習
圖片參考：https://s.yimg.com/rk/AD05634470/o/727069046.png

2014-03-24 03:05:57 補充：
2.改變我們的飲食也可以幫助阻止地球暖化
Changing our diet also can help earth keeping from global warming.
★ 註解: diet = 節食, 並非「改變我們的飲食」的含意，所以我改成了＂Changing our eating habits....＂
★另外: Changing our eating habits can also help for keeping off the change of the global Ecological environmental warming of the earth.
2014-03-24 03:14:59 補充：
也以簡畧的改成:
★ Changing our eating habits can also help for keeping off the change of the global warming of the earth.
★the global Ecological environmental warming 解作: 全球生態環境的暖化
2014-03-24 03:16:58 補充：
3.The amount of water and land used to produce meat是用來種農作物地的許多倍
is as much as crop.
To breed the edible animals are in need of much water and the lands than the crops planting in lots of doubling.
註解: produce meat生產肉類, 改成了: To breed the edible animals 飼養食用動物
crops planting= 種植谷物
2014-03-24 03:24:18 補充：
lots of doubling 解作"許多倍"
1.愈來愈多人正開始提倡吃在地食物的觀念
More and more people is starting promotion that eat local food. ( 中式英語)
★建議: More and more people have started for the promotion to eat the local
food.
註解: have started for the promotion....用了現在完成式, 表示某動作已經開始一直廷續下去
2014-03-24 03:29:00 補充：
that eat local food. ( 中式英語), 改成了: to eat the local food.
To 小琦: Very Sorry 哦! 我可能改動得太多了。學好英語並非一朝一夕的事，加油喔！

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