請問英文文章翻譯理解的要領 - 社會議題

最近看文章發現自己閱讀理解要比一般人慢了許多
想請教英文達人，要如何快速正確的理解文章
可以講出文章的每一段再講些什麼
我的理解都是先轉換成中文，在判斷是誰修飾誰
誰先翻譯，但是翻譯出來的文章都坑坑疤疤的
連不太起來，希望有高手可以教我幾招，
幫我把文章翻譯修飾的更完善
以下是我找的文章加上我的破英文翻譯
The cell phone is a social medium developing into a multimedia digital platform that
provides, obtains, and shares personal and social information.
手機是一種社會媒介，它提供了多媒體數位平台，可取得所分配的個人和社會資訊。
Thus, digital divide, social support, and privacy issues familiar to students of the Internet are here applied to understanding why people may be more or less interested in new text and video cell phone services.
因此，數位落差，社會支援和我們熟悉的網際網路對學生所帶來的隱私權議題在這裡我們應用於了解為何人們可以有較多或較少的興趣在面對新的文字和影音手機服務裡
The first part of this study develops a basic model of demographic,social, and prior technology use influences on interest in three categories of cell phone text and video services derived from uses and gratifications studies of traditional and new media services—surveillance, entertainment, and instrumental.
本研究第一部份為發展基礎的模型，有人口統計學、社會和新興科技的模型，使用網際網路在三種範疇：手機、文字和影音服務的取得經由使用傳統優良的研究和新的媒介服務：監控、娛樂、和有幫助的工具
Hypotheses from this model were tested using data from an April 2007 US national random-digit dialing telephone survey. The by-now familiar digital divide demographics had both indirect and direct influences on assessments of these sets of services, although primarily for entertainment services (which were also negatively influenced by concerns about privacy threats).
該假說從這個模型，可以使用資料檢驗，來自美國2007年4月隨機數位電話調查目前較普遍數位落差人口統計資料有直接和間接的影響，在評量這些服務，雖然主要為娛樂服務，但這些服務也有負面的影響，像是我們所關心的隱私權威脅
Surveillance services—here, providing location of family, friends and self to each other—were more positively assessed when family and friends lived closer, and with less prior communication technology use.
監控服務：在這邊，提供家庭的地方，朋友和自己對每個人，當家庭和朋友生活很接近，且使用較先進的通訊技術，會有較多的正面的評價
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Instrumental services—such as directions when lost and health emergency information—were more positively assessed by those with greater social support and a stronger belief in privacy rights.
有幫助的服務：像是方向，當迷路和緊急健康訊息，是可以有較正面的評價，藉由優異的社會支援和在隱私權上的堅定信心。
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Thus, while overall only the entertainment services were even moderately explained, there were understandable differences in influences among the three sets of services, with demographic factors predominating. 因此，當完全只有娛樂服務是公平適度地被解釋，他們可以被了解不同的影響在三種服務中，藉由使用人口統計學因子
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資料來源：
http://www.comm.ucsb.edu/faculty/rrice/a94.htm