請幫我check哪裡錯誤(英文高手請進入) - 暖化

By Necoo
at 2009-03-29T00:00

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The country which I would most like to visit is Maldives. Because that releases tons of CO2 into the air, leading to global warming .Maldives will vanish from the earth.
I very like having beach country.In my impression.Maldives has blue ocean and white sand beach.These characteristic attracts enough to me.
The imagination when you lie on the sand beach to look at the blue sky.
If you have anything trouble.you will forget. In Maldives you can swimming diving and fishing .If you tired you can back to build on the sea the room to rest . Nobody can come in this room to be tired of your. you can entirely relaxing.
The Maldives has the sea water blue sky white clouds and sand beach. Therefore has many people to take vacation to there. So I am same as everybody. This is the vacation which I want to pursue.
我最喜歡去的國家是馬爾地夫.因為是放太多CO2.導致全球暖化.馬爾地夫就快要消失了.
我非常喜歡海島國家.在我印象中.馬爾地夫有著藍色的海和純白的沙灘.光這些特色就足夠吸引我.想像當你躺在沙灘上望著藍色的天空,即使你有任何煩惱.你都將會忘記.在馬爾地夫你可以游泳.潛水.釣魚.如果累了你可以回到位於海上的房間休息.在房間沒有任何人能來打擾你.你能得到完全的放鬆.
馬爾地夫有著海水藍天白雲和沙灘.所以有很多人到那裏渡假.而我跟大家一樣,這就是我想追求的假期
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By David
at 2009-04-01T03:39

The country which I would most like to visit is Maldives.
The country I would like to visit most is Maldives.
Because that releases tons of CO2 into the air, leading to global warming .Maldives will vanish from the earth.
這邊我必須提醒您，never start a sentence with words like “Because”, “But”，這是英文作文必須注意的事項之一。這裡建議改成. 還有在作文中請盡量用全名(carbondioxide)而非縮寫的化學式(CO2)，學術性的論文除外。
Maldives is (sinking below sea-level)/(merging into the ocean) as a result of global warming, caused by tons of carbondioxide released into the air.
I very like having beach country.
I like countries surrounded by the beach.
In my impression. Maldives has blue ocean and white sand beach. These characteristic attracts enough to me.
Maldives strikes me as a beach with blue ocean and white sands.
The imagination when you lie on the sand beach to look at the blue sky. If you have anything trouble.you will forget.
Just imagining yourself lying on the sandy beach, looking at the blue sky. It can make you forget all your troubles.
In Maldives you can swimming diving and fishing .
In Maldives, you can go swimming, scouba diving(潛水) and fishing .
If you tired you can back to build on the sea the room to rest . Nobody can come in this room to be tired of your. you can entirely relaxing.
When you get tired, you can take a rest in the room built on the sea, where you can enjoy total relaxation with no one to disturb you there.
The Maldives has the sea water blue sky white clouds and sand beach. Therefore has many people to take vacation to there. So I am same as everybody. This is the vacation which I want to pursue.
Many people go on a vacation to Maldives to enjoy its sea water, blue sky, white clouds and sandy beach. Just like everybody, this is kind of place I desired to go for my vacation.
我已經盡量保留您的原文，希望您會喜歡我所做的修改。

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at 2009-03-30T07:37

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By Andrew
at 2009-04-02T02:17

The country which I would like mostly to visit is Maldives.
Because the tons of CO2 released into the air, leading to global warming. Maldives will vanish from the earth.
改寫成倒裝句
Maldives is going to merge into sea because of the global warming caused by tons of CO2 released into the atmosphere.
I like countries who have beach. In my impression, Maldives has blue ocean and white sand beach. These characteristics are enough to attract me.
Imagination when you lie on the beach sand looking at the blue sky,
anything troubled you will be forgot.
In Maldives you can do swimming, diving and fishing.
If you are tired you can back to rest in the room that standing in the sea, nobody can come into the room to bother you, you can get entirely relaxing.
Maldives has sea water, blue sky, white clouds and sand beach. Therefore many people take vacation at there; and I am same as everybody.
This is the vacation that I want.

請幫我check哪裡錯誤(英文高手請進入) - 暖化

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